Hello, I will now attempt poetry.

I am cool
Blister is not
Blister is not cool
Like me, i am cool

that cat stuff is gimmicky as hell. "hello i am a cat what is my existence" could pluck that out of any 15-year old girl's tumblr *about me* section

what have you expressed in this poem that you couldn't just write out in prose? all you've done is scramble together a bunch of pseudo-profound sounding musings of life that really don't mean anything; there's no unifying theme other than *life is misery*, you jump from lines like "all things are prophecy" to "all music plays in my own ear" ??? what does this even mean?? it's just plain bad. there's no beauty here. it's an incoherent mess and anyone reading this is gonna think a.) it's a paraody or b.) leave immensely dissatisfied

This is poetry:

If you think poetry's supposed to be just rhymes, you suck bro. Poetry is soul, not an autism of arrangement.

belovedprincess says

That's nice, quiche.

Here, I wrote this for you, peach:



Are you happy?

ok but where's the poetry

Well I think I did quite well anyway.

This is definitely the last one:

Wait, I had one more in me:

Last one:

Here's another one:

I am no egotist. An egotist wants for nobody but himself.

That's nice, quiche.

Here, I wrote this for you, peach:



Are you happy?

I mean, there's an option to mute posters so...

It's quite beautiful, peach.

dhgis is old

This is art: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D0WnZyxp_Wo

Macklemore is actually one clever-assed artist.

steph says

The fact that these both have the " ____ like (insert imagery here)" is purely a coincidence

that's because it's a cliché

steph says

feel free to vomit all over them.

my freedom has been felt

The family photos albums thing pissed you off, I bet, didn't it?

Don't be so childishly ratty, gala.

Macklemore's 'Downtown' is an obvious repackaging of Bruno Mars's 'Uptown Funk,' too, btw. There's a fascinating subtlety in what I wrote about.

belovedprincess says

Well someone is a neat freak. I like that art which jars the senses.

there's a difference between jarring the senses and clogging the drain with your unwashed verbal pubes

First was recreational. Second was a "nonsense" poem we had to free write in class. The fact that these both have the " ____ like (insert imagery here)" is purely a coincidence, these were written months apart. I chose them because everything else I am either saving for a publication, or I think are awful. These are tolerable so feel free to vomit all over them.

My adorable 22 year old kitty <3

just one of my charcoal still lifes.