deleteddeletedalmost 11 years agoedited
Teacher wanted you to say:
"Although running is his favourite hobby, he doesn't win at races."
But you did:
"Despite running being his favourite hobby, he doesn't win at races"
Now, they both work. but Although is the one that made less changes in the sentence, even though Despite works too.
You changed "is" with "being", even though it doesn't matter that much, but that is the teachers' job, and what they're told to do.
"Although running is his favourite hobby, he doesn't win at races."
But you did:
"Despite running being his favourite hobby, he doesn't win at races"
Now, they both work. but Although is the one that made less changes in the sentence, even though Despite works too.
You changed "is" with "being", even though it doesn't matter that much, but that is the teachers' job, and what they're told to do.
